NARRATIVES & COLLABORATIVE WRITING (LOW B2)
“Suddenly something has happened to me As I was having my cup of tea Suddenly I was feeling depressed I was utterly and totally stressed Do you know you made me cry? Do you know you made me die?”
THIS IS THE NICE BEGINNING FOR A STORY. WATCH THE SONG CLIP AND TELL US THE STORY BEHIND THE SONG… SHE IS UTTERLY AND TOTALLY STRESSED………WHAT HAPPENED TO HER?
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MAKE SURE THAT YOU:
- DESCRIBE WHEN AND WHERE THE STORY TAKES PLACE
- THE CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER IS CLEAR BY USING SUITABLE LINKING WORDS
- USE SUITABLE NARRATIVE TENSES (VARIETY OF PAST TENSES
THERE´S A DOCUMENT ABOUT STORY WRITING THAT YOU CAN DOWNLOAD FROM MY DROPBOX
Posted on December 2, 2015, in CAN'T STOP THE MUSIC (SONGS), GOTTA WATCH IT and tagged B2, B2 (LOW). Bookmark the permalink. 3 Comments.
The story begins when two children were moved after Social Services took custody away from their mother. Surely they would be handed over to another family because of her mother’s economical situation, but she decided not to be separated from her sons.
Dressed up in a wig and a long coat, neither her sons recognized their mother when she got into the building where the kids were temporary staying.
The children’s thought that they were being kidnapped, but everything changed when she removed the wig.
The beginning of a new life. The woman knew that she had to leave it all behind but with her two kids. It didn’t matter if she had no money or a place to sleep. She was determined to give her sons whatever they needed to be cheerful. So they started a long escape towards somewhere else in south.
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Very good story. CONGRATULATIONS, PACO !!!!
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Pay attention to the following:
Economical
neither
temporary
in south
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